Elevator Pitch #2
Elevator Pitch 2
Looking back on my first elevator pitch, I received feedback stating that my energy died down towards the end and that I was just saying facts, so I focused on keeping the energy up the entire time this time and not saying facts as a robot would. Because everyone knows the facts of course.
Looking back on my first elevator pitch, I received feedback stating that my energy died down towards the end and that I was just saying facts, so I focused on keeping the energy up the entire time this time and not saying facts as a robot would. Because everyone knows the facts of course.
Hello Jason, I loved your intro in this pitch. I think you have a great idea and I'm sure 85% of Gainesville would agree with you. You have a good way of keeping the message alive with your emotions, ideas, and your statistic. I think this pitch is perfect, not that your last one wasn't. Keep up the good work.
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