22A: Elevator Pitch #3
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cEtbrweDXWU&feature=youtu.be
Feedback reflection: Enrique commented on my second elevator pitch and stated that I had great energy and kept it through the entirety of the pitch. He also stated that it was an improvement from my last one since I wasn't able to maintain interest of the viewer on my first elevator pitch.
What did you change?:
I changed my introduction and actually had the lights turn on at the beginning of my video rather than use my hand to cover the camera. My friend helped me out with that. I also tried to let my pitch flow more rather than make it seem scripted, which could come off as ingenuine.
Feedback reflection: Enrique commented on my second elevator pitch and stated that I had great energy and kept it through the entirety of the pitch. He also stated that it was an improvement from my last one since I wasn't able to maintain interest of the viewer on my first elevator pitch.
What did you change?:
I changed my introduction and actually had the lights turn on at the beginning of my video rather than use my hand to cover the camera. My friend helped me out with that. I also tried to let my pitch flow more rather than make it seem scripted, which could come off as ingenuine.
Hi Jason, I really liked your opening and the creativity and imagination which it brought to your presentation as a whole. I also agree that your energy throughout your pitch was excellent and showed that you actually cared about the topic. Your pitch flowed well but I think it could still be improved upon with more practice.
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